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My Sister's Graduation

Yesterday is my sister’s graduation. She had graduated from Jember University in Elementary Education Major. The day before yesterday, my father and I had got in Jember. My sister had planed the kebaya for her graduation. It has red color with some little glow things follow it. It’s a glamour kebaya that I have seen. She has black heels for her event. I have planed my dress which has same color, red. The dress has some little things in front of my body with velvet skirt that has black color. My father used black coat with black pants and a red tie. He is very handsome.

In the day, my sister is one of the students who had been Cumlaude in her graduted. My father and I are very proud of her. After that, we had a photo session. First, my father, my sister and I had a photo session, after that my sister with her boy friend.